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Title: Hey Alea here...
Reviewed By: KuboTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 03:54 CDT
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OOh pls pls pls dont make us wait to long ur story i sow good i check atleast 3 times a day if its updated...kinda sad aint it?
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Title: Oooh!
Reviewed By: GladAngel On: August 18, 2005 02:34 CDT
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Ooooh! That opening for the chapter! Maybe some 3x4 action? I hope! I wonder what Duo will find in the box and the safe? Maybe his mom will find money to cure his acne? I always thought that his mother was kind of ignorant to his acne problems but I guess not. I feel so sad for Duo for feeling frightened to go over to WuFei's home. He's afraid of what they'll think of him when they see him...oh that must be a terrible and terrifying feeling! I'm anticipating the future chapters, I hope some relationships form -oh, also that Zechs gets with WuFei, I don't actually paticulary like that pairing but it works in your story, I love that. Oh, one more thing, sorry with all the abreviations and the 'S.C.' ('Sister Quatre' I'm hoping you got that?) my sister was breathing down my neck ^-^
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Reviewed By: Alea On: August 14, 2005 18:20 CDT
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I absolutly adore your story! I cant wait for the update i love it!
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 12:57 CDT
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I always try to review a story chapter for chapter... It makes the author feel better, and me feel better... keep going, okay?
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLA! I've been reading this for a while and i really like it! I've never seen a fic where Duo's the actual 'ugly' insecure guy. i still like it though.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: GladAngel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 02:14 CDT
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Yay! a new chapter! You can sooo tell T likes S.Q. and I abosolutely adore the way you describe Heero ex. like the way he smiled an' stuff. I never would have thought that these boys would write about that kind of stuff! lol Poor Duo.....feeling left out! Can't wait for next one, hope something happens- like things develope farther O:)
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Reviewed By: bombayoni the login is fucked On: August 13, 2005 00:20 CDT
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You know what? That was even funnier than the crudeness.... the arrogant fanboys thing? i loved it... poor clueless duo
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Title: FFARG Review (Chapter 1)
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:38 CDT
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Ok, I reviewed this earlier, but for some reason it is not showing up. First off let me say that I am not well versed in the world of Gundam Wing. With that being said, on with the story... I really like the descriptions you have made in this first chapter. There are a few comma splices, but other than that the punctuation was good. I can't remember that there were any spelling errors, or if there were any, they were minor. I must say that this first chapter has sparked my interest. The descriptions were well done and greatly added to the story line. Thank you for submitting this to the FFARG!!!
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Title: Ugly
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story so far! I really like watching the guys intereact together. Duo is just so surprised to be making friends at all not to mention that these are people that he actually admires and feels that he does have a connection with is probably yet another surprise. Poor Quatre! He is just a source of trouble for poor Wufei, Trowa , and Duo. Heero seems to be immune though. Thanks for replying to my review! I love hearing from the authors because you guys really make my day by providing these stories for us to read. Looking forward to reading the next chapter really soon and take care.
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 14:43 CDT
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what in the name of all the gods posessed you to write that scene? I couldn't stop laughing.... Continue please
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 11:00 CDT
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moremoremoremoremoremoremoreomore
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Reviewed By: Jeminacat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 23:22 CDT
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oh, idiot me forgot to mention one thing... I was a reviewer at fanfiction.net, I think I signed Blair.... yeah sorry
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Reviewed By: Jeminacat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2005 23:19 CDT
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Yay, its posted here. Thats a good thing.... Um, its still all wonderfuls and woo, its not gone.... sorry if i\\\'m not making much with the sense, its kinda late.. well I can\\\'t wait for the rest, okay I can wait but *smacks head* Sorry about the babble. =)
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Title: ugly
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! I'm glad to see that Duo is recovering and that he is slowly, but surely making new friends. This should help his self esteem out alot also, with his jaw being broken he will lose weight and that will help him out with the baby fat that he was trying to lose. But, more importantly he is starting to enjoy his life more and not be so depressed and secondly it was nice to see that Trowa whooped everybody's ass for Duo! Last couple of chapters have been pretty good. Looking forward to the next update also thank you for fixing the formatting!
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Title: ugly
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story you have here. As you said we always see stories where Duo is very attractive, so this story is definetly showing him in a new light as it were. At least Duo has Zechs and he seems to have a lot of influence on him, but what type of life can you have you are constantly ostaricized because of how you look. It really is sad that in today\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s society if you are attractive you are treated better than if you are not. It doesn\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t change how a person is inside it is just how society as a whole treats them. I just hope that there is a light at the end of the tunnel for Duo because it is so sad just reading this and remembering what it was like being a teenager. Great story so far and looking forward to the next chapter soon. The only problem that I have with this story is the formatting of it. I was unable to read certain parts of the story not matter what I did to try to retify the problem. Could you please be sure to fix this for the upcoming chapters? I would really appreciate it.
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