| "Another Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vbprl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2016 17:49 PDT
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Lovely story. Vegeta was so in love.
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Reviewed By: LP On: June 20, 2016 00:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been a long time since a fanfic has made me cry. This was so
wonderfully creative and a pleasure to read. I didn't know how to
feel throughout the story, my feelings often mirrored Vegeta's
confused thoughts. What an original concept! Definitely worth the
read.
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2011 19:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a well written and intricately woven story. It was definitely original. I really enjoy your stories. Hopefully, you'll come back someday and write more b/v fics. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2011 09:41 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor bulma, to have someone that you've lost back in your life, and then realize that person might not feel the same for u. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2011 21:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this chapter was so sad. My heart is breaking for them. |
Reviewed By: Ambience [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2011 10:37 PST
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Wow! This was incredible...I've read all of your B/V stories and I'm a huge fan! It would be fantastic if you could write that piece about Vegeta confronting his past self...now that would be funny! Anyway, hoping you'll at least write more brilliant fics soon :) |
Title: Kia
Reviewed By: Kiarene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 03:25 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it very much! A sequel would be lovely, pretty please? ^_^
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 03:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent story brought to its end and I can honestly say I'm sorry to see it do so, but I know you shall write something else to capitivate me and thus I'm content. As for what you should do next, I'd kill to see a squel to "Sole Survivors" That was one of my top 3 Dragonball Z stories and while awesome in and of itself, I couldn't help but want more of a backstory on Trunks. A new story would be well recieved though. I'd be first in line for something like that. It's rare to [stumble, fall, trip, crawl] FIND fanfiction of this caliber and I always look forward to more. Well Done! ~Kenya
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Title: I'm stunned!
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 01:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry that I did not review after I read each chapter but I just had to keep going! This story is just utterly, insanely AMAZING. I have never cried reading a fanfic, but when Vegeta was watching the message from Bulma on the computer, I had tears in my eyes! OMG, this story is just fantastic! You did a great job packing so much emotion and substance into this fic...you are truly one of the best writer's out there. Thank you so much for sharing this. ^-^
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: alexandraite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 01:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first I have to say that I just read chapter two but I HAD to review before I read more. This story is AMAZING! The emotion is so raw and so moving that my eyes sting and I think I stopped breathing a few times. And it is so sad! The way you have written for these characters is very believable with the events that they have survived. The interaction between Vegeta and his children in the first chapter were very touching. And I love the way he is with little toddler Trunks in the second chapter. It is absolutely gut wrenching to feel Vegeta's pain and regret and also poor past Bulma...Gah! Anyway, I am loving it so far and just wanted to let you know. Super job!! I am going to go read more now! I'm sorry that I don't have any comments on spelling/grammar and the like because really I haven't noticed anything but the story itself. ^-^
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Title: Another Lifetime
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 18:51 PST
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Oh how i wish you can do both, but right now i want more of Sole Survivors. The end/beginning was a great twist and i hope you will write more of this great story.To see if you can change Vegeta's way of thinking. I really like the concept. I love your work and can't wait to read more. Love ya your biggest Fan. You always make us fall back in love with Vegeta and Bulma..I hope you know that.. again can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 21:48 PST
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Hi, this is a great story. Really imaginative, very touching. My heart is breaking for all of them right now. :(
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Reviewed By: violetbura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 01:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never been too good at these reviews, but I had to tell you that I have never cried so much about a fanfic as I did when I read this one. A/U's aren't really my cup of tea, but this is really making me rethink my position on that, so I congratulate you. So...hmmm...if I had to explain what I really like this fic, I would say that I like the fact that it is beautifully written and that it made me think and feel at the same time. I also admire the way you've ended the last few chapters in a way that you could just end the story right there if you wanted to (does that even make sense?). For example, I wasn't really expecting a chapter 6 because chapter 5 had seemed to have enough of a conclusion at the end of it. I do have an idea of what I hope the ending is like, but I won't put it here because I don't want to run the risk of spoiling it. I can't wait until this is finished (I hate it when authors abandon good fics), and I would gladly recommend this to anybody who asked me for a good read. Thanks, and I hope that review was in some way satisfying. X(^_^)X
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Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 13:45 PST
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Amazing story; I think it will stuck in my head for a long time.
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Title: More Please!
Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 02:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how long I've waited for this story to update. You are by far one of my favorite authors and I can honestly say I've truely enjoyed everything you've written. Really, can you get anymore awesome? As for the story...You know, I knew Vegeta would remain stubborn untill the very end. Anything less would be out of character, though I can see his delima. While Bulma is Bulma, the one that he loves is back in the future dying, and while the past holds a way to make ameand, I think he might feel it's a little like cheeting. Granted, they're the same person, but why should he give this Bulma all he had learned and experienced with the other? Wasn't she the one that put up with years of hell, confident in the man he could be. I don't know..., that's me. Maybe I'm rambling again. I can't wait to see hhow this works out. Especially the next chapter. The sooner, the better. Kenya
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