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| "Another Lifetime" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: violetbura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 01:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never been too good at these reviews, but I had to tell you that I have never cried so much about a fanfic as I did when I read this one. A/U's aren't really my cup of tea, but this is really making me rethink my position on that, so I congratulate you. So...hmmm...if I had to explain what I really like this fic, I would say that I like the fact that it is beautifully written and that it made me think and feel at the same time. I also admire the way you've ended the last few chapters in a way that you could just end the story right there if you wanted to (does that even make sense?). For example, I wasn't really expecting a chapter 6 because chapter 5 had seemed to have enough of a conclusion at the end of it. I do have an idea of what I hope the ending is like, but I won't put it here because I don't want to run the risk of spoiling it. I can't wait until this is finished (I hate it when authors abandon good fics), and I would gladly recommend this to anybody who asked me for a good read. Thanks, and I hope that review was in some way satisfying. X(^_^)X
| Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 13:45 PST
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Amazing story; I think it will stuck in my head for a long time.
| Title: More Please!
Reviewed By: Princess Koriandr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 02:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how long I've waited for this story to update. You are by far one of my favorite authors and I can honestly say I've truely enjoyed everything you've written. Really, can you get anymore awesome? As for the story...You know, I knew Vegeta would remain stubborn untill the very end. Anything less would be out of character, though I can see his delima. While Bulma is Bulma, the one that he loves is back in the future dying, and while the past holds a way to make ameand, I think he might feel it's a little like cheeting. Granted, they're the same person, but why should he give this Bulma all he had learned and experienced with the other? Wasn't she the one that put up with years of hell, confident in the man he could be. I don't know..., that's me. Maybe I'm rambling again. I can't wait to see hhow this works out. Especially the next chapter. The sooner, the better. Kenya
| Title: Another Lifetime
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 20:06 PST
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This has to be one of the best stories and chapter i've read. You just let us all experience the love, pain, sorrow, hope from these two. I don't think i'll ever stop love these two as long as your writing about them. I just want you to know you put tears in my eyes again. I only hope that for vegeta to take this second chance he has with her, cause in the real world we'll never get it. Please update soon.
| Title: Another Lifetime
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 16:52 PDT
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Wow i'm so full of emotion right now. to read of all his pain for the both of them, i;m torn, i want him to be with them but then i want him to go back to his bulma. I can almost feel his pain right now. One of the best stories that i've read so far, please keep writing more of our most favorite couple .*HUGS*
| Title: tears almost flow, flow, flow
Reviewed By: Dark ki (again too lazy to login in On: September 04, 2005 23:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had to stop three times to calm myself down. i have this thing about crying about fictional situtions and even some real ones. i don't care if i am a girl. i find it weak. this chapter was close to making me do that. i love this story! the details and such, are enough to make you tear up. i love B/V stories but, i didn't know which Bulma he should stay with. both have . . . well. i can't explain it. you want him to go back but, you don't . . . at the same time. YOUR GOING TO HAVE TO MAKE THE DECIDION FOR ME. I CAN'T MAKE UP MY MIND!. (calms down.) you write very well. you get right into their heads. i love looking at there point of views and how different their are. you do that wonderfully. okay. i'm betting you are tried of reading this (if you or reading this far down) so i leaving it at that. okay, bye-bye now;)
| Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: Quadrono Leader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! Just unbelievably Awesome! It's been a long time since the DBZ fandom has had any truly original fan fiction in it, but I'm proud to see that originality isn't dead. Let's face it, the whole "*Name a character* goes back in time" storyline has been done to death, but never in a million years would I have thought of a VIRUS, let alone Vegeta being the one sent back. Just doesn't seem like his style, but I guess when it comes to Bulma, our boy's down for anything. I just love this story. The sex was awesome and the plot was intense and interesting. I can't wait for this story to be updated. Continue the great work.
| Reviewed By: TrishaE On: August 24, 2005 12:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. beautiful. amazing. wow please write more!
| Reviewed By: animeluver4ever2001 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo deep write the rest please it was that good
| Reviewed By: kinoko *not signed in* On: August 03, 2005 14:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story line, a very origional one as well. I commend you as a writer, you've done very well thus far, I can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: Dark ki (not login in because too lazy) On: July 31, 2005 23:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I . . . um . . . wow! but, honsty i been thinking. when Trunks came the first time. i think it really was the past. but, when he come again he already existed as a baby and a different timeline had to be created. so if Vegeta is dead here. he relly did go into the past. and not a differnet timeline. (that's just my thoery. i could be wrong. i never jumped into the past here.) well anyways, i never read a story like this. i was read one where Vegeta going to the past in Trunks place and such but, nothing like this. whoa! okay now it 2:00 o'clock in the morning. i have work at 9. i better get to sleep or i will be sleeping on the register. see you next time.
| Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: July 28, 2005 12:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do so love your writng! This fic is just beautiful and I'll definitely be looking forward to the next installment. Happy writng ^_~
| Reviewed By: Goatnb On: July 25, 2005 15:59 PDT
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This was very good. I could nitpick at it, but I enjoyed it so I won't
| Reviewed By: stryderf 0 On: July 25, 2005 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with the below comment,lol 2 lazy 2 write
| Title: BEST STORY EVER
Reviewed By: Heiress2thethrone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 12:06 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! This has to be the best AU I've ever read. I mean this has made me feel every single emotion there exists in our world. I can't tell you how empressed I am with this story. To watch both Vegeta and Bulma struggle to come to terms with each other. I feel so sad for Bulma for she's going through much more than Vegeta ever had, I think anyway. But then I feel sorry for Vegeta too since he's utterly confused and I wouldn't mind having a husband so dedicated and faithful as he is! I simply adore this fic and I can't wait until you update. Please do and I'll review. Hasta.
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