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| "Summer Vacation Disaster" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Great fic
Reviewed By: ServantIndo On: May 23, 2006 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, you have proven yourself in a good chapter. Granted the chapter is sad, but all in all good. I don't think your parents can actually do anything even if they are homophobic (I'm so glad that my mum isnt since I'm bi). You have great talent. Oh, and if you ever get the chance and want to read some of my works, http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1004048/ this is where you can find mine. I hope to hear from you! And i can't wait to read your next chapter! ^^ I'm Sorry that I didnt read it sooner, but I have ben busy, but I'll try and keep up with it more. Well, good job and happy writing!! =^.^= Meow! ~Servant Indo, The Servantian Knight
| Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: ServantIndo On: February 10, 2006 01:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I love it. I hope you write more in later times. I've actually been trying to keep waych on if you do. I love how eveything is set up. Hope you sont quite writting as you have talent. Great job and happy writing!! =^.^= Meow!
| Reviewed By: foxkit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 01:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, well, I review everything I read....I think this was fairly good, (I LOVE YAOI!!!) but it went by a little too fast. Also, you may consider spacing out the lines (you may have to do it by hand, it didn't work when I made my fics double spaced) Anyway, keep going!
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