| "American Love" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: September 06, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was short but it still had a lot going on. That talent getting a marriage and a child birth in one chapter. Cool! Hope their a another one.
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Reviewed By: Watch Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 17:25 CDT
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Hey I'm still lovin' it! Lol! My sister read your story too and she loved it... and she don't watch Inuyasha! I was amazed! She was like "People watch that and can actually write something about that's worth reading!" I got mad because she was mean about it, but she still loved it! Thanks for a good story!
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Reviewed By: Watch Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 19:59 CDT
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Hey! This is a really great story! I can't wait to see how it comes out!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: September 05, 2005 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH, that is so sweet. It is true when you leave a letter or something saying where your going that means that you want the person to follow. I should know I watch and read enough romances for a couple of people and still have some left over. My boyfriend says I need a new hobby.
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Reviewed By: fallen_angel13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so loving this story. It's a very refrshing plot, because it's including their past incarnations. Anyway, keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Virgo On: August 19, 2005 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far keep writing Please
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Reviewed By: Princess-In-Training On: August 13, 2005 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I like the little flashbacks of I guess their pass lifes or someting. Keep writing
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 01:18 CDT
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Hey once again your chapters are great. i hope you write more of them soon please notify me when you do oh and my email is krystalclearkiss@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story. i hope you write more chapters for your story soon. oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes thanks and i will keep R&R your story.
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Title: not one
Reviewed By: squeeker On: July 28, 2005 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i fist read the name of the story and the summary i thought no its gonna suck cause its gonna be a self-insertion or something like that, but im glad i did read it cause even thought the characters r almost insanely A.U. i like it. i like that ur giving kag and sota alot of interaction, making them seem close, cause thats something u sorta kinda pick up on in the actual series and only like two stories that i have read have that. oh and do as much kikyo bashing as u can cause i get the feeling ur a kikyo hater and i am too. but yeah anywho ur doing a way better job than i even dared to hoped for so just keep up the good work and i hope that this really really long review (or atleast longer than i usually write) makes up for all the assholes who dont review and for when i didnt read it the frist time (corse if i had then u wouldnt have this review, u would still have gotten one it just would have been shorter). so update soon.
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