Reviewed By: Time Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2001 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It looks like you have a good start, but it's hard to tell this early on in the story. Keep working on it. |
