| "The Life of a Military Dog" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: redwingsbabe14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue soon!!!!!!!!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Meru Keshoki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2006 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Its getting really good, please continue!
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Reviewed By: Zicue [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!! finish it pleaaase!!!!! *doesnt let go of athors legs* i beeeg of yoooooou!!!!! that was so a cliff hanger!! but i love this story!!=D
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Reviewed By: Fei Fei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE finish, i want to know what else happens!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 11:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good very good.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: girl_x_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi ya, just started reading this! It's pretty awesome!!! Great job, with the story so far!!! ttyl
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Reviewed By: marshalle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i think i saw this fic in fanfiction too, but you've update here and not there... am i right? anyway... i'm so glad i stumbled again to your fic...
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 15:31 CDT
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This fic has been so much fun to read. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 13:16 CDT
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I'm not going to bash your writing, however you could use some help in your formatting the story. It would be a little easier on the eyes of your reader if you had one character speak per line, rather than have multiple characters speaking in the same paragrapgh. It's neater, and it also doesn't strain the reader's eyes. For example, instead of this: "Hey Mustang you jerk!" Ed yelled. "What do you want now, shrimp?" Mustang replied. Try this: "Hey Mustang you jerk!" Ed yelled. "What do you want now, shrimp?" Mustang replied. As you can see, it's a little easier to decipher and you know who's talking when. Just a little bit of constructive criticsm; if you can do that, then I'm sure the value of your impressive story will only increase. This is KoroshiyaZwei, out.
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Title: What's this mean?
Reviewed By: meghanlee3 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I am now totally in love with it! Please continue to update (even if you do it at obescene hours of the night) and... Yeah. Good story.
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Title: What the hell
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 02:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay I think people have a major problem here why the fuck aren't they reviewing? I mean yours is o much better than my FMAFF. I mean seriously. I think all them bastards are intimidated or something congrats on the watermelons tho
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Title: lala
Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more this is getting to be too much for me! Wow I reviewed alot. I need to control myself!
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Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 13:36 CDT
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Oh my God it was amazing! NOw I have to wait for the next chapter oh shit! uh *scraches head sits down on couch and watches computer* I am in absloute love with it. Plz keep going the suspense is killing me
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Reviewed By: animeempress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 12:15 CDT
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Hilarious I love it and I can't wait to see more chapters and I won''t so hurry
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