| "A Miko's Instincts" Reviews/Comments [ 192 ] |
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Reviewed By: dreamy E On: October 26, 2005 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing those chapters because this story is great!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady P.I.M.P (not logged in) On: October 26, 2005 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya shes dead!!Im glad next week on the show shes dead to.Why did you have to put a cliffy, though? O well please*pouts*please!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 17:14 CDT
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'"No matter," thought Naraku. "I'll have my shard back soon enough. Then not only will I add the miko's powers to my own, but also I will have her anytime I want her." Miroku smirked. "The motion in the ocean, miko, the motion in the ocean."' -- Why is Miroku smirking by Naraku?
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 17:12 CDT
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Another great chapter, can't wait for the next update! It should be rather interesting!
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Reviewed By: Tayohmay [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:53 CDT
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I think this was creative. I really enjoyed reading it. I would definitly recomend this this anyone who likes Inuyasha, or good plot-lines.
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Reviewed By: Tayohmay [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was really good, creative, and all around recmmended story. I wish I could write something like this^_^.
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Reviewed By: blackwidow10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:17 CDT
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oooooooh...that was just mean. :P i still dont think naraku is gonna get away with it this time, but i guess we'll see. and kagome taught sango how to...THAT was funny. "When the guys leave, they leave us the dishes." lol!
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Title: Idris Dag-Ellams
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I love this story! Good work! Funny stuff.
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Title: Idris Dag-Ellams
Reviewed By: Idris Dag-Ellams [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I love this story! Good work! Funny stuff.
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Reviewed By: REALL BAD SPELLER On: October 25, 2005 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once agen wonderfull chapter please update soon I cant wate for the final chapter.
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Title: EVIL NARAKU!!
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl425294 On: October 25, 2005 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Naraku is going to do that while Kagome is in labor?! I knew Naraku was eveil but I never imagined he woul stoop that low! Well, actually I did but that's not the point. Anyway, please update and write more chapters! I want to see the birth of the pups! PLEASE UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: Alison W On: October 25, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright I went on a Japanese web site for names and stumbled upon these Inu/Kag baby names Boys: DAICHI means "first great son" or "great land" HIROSHI means "generous" ICHIRO means "first son" ISAMU means "bravery" JIRO means "second son" KEN'ICHI means "strong first son" KENJI means "strong second son" Girl Names: CHIKAKO means "child of wisdom" EMI means "blessed with beauty" Mir/San baby names: Boy:KIYOSHI means "purity" Girl:TAKARA means "treasure" Ok thats enough I guess for now for you to look at just ideas, Hope this helped you. Enjoy and keep up with the great Fan fic. Oh and here is the web address for that website. http://www.behindthename.com/php/view.php?name=takara Love Alison
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Reviewed By: Alison W. On: October 24, 2005 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright I went on a Japanese web site for names and stumbled upon these Inu/Kag baby names Boys: DAICHI means "first great son" or "great land" HIROSHI means "generous" ICHIRO means "first son" ISAMU means "bravery" JIRO means "second son" KEN'ICHI means "strong first son" KENJI means "strong second son" Girl Names: CHIKAKO means "child of wisdom" EMI means "blessed with beauty" Mir/San baby names: Boy:KIYOSHI means "purity" Girl:TAKARA means "treasure" Ok thats enough I guess for now for you to look at just ideas, Hope this helped you. Enjoy and keep up with the great Fan fic. Oh and here is the web address for that website. http://www.behindthename.com/php/view.php?name=takara Love Alison
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (not signed in. big shock) On: October 23, 2005 22:20 CDT
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Jaken... and.... Kikyou..... Oh god, my over-active imagination.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 20:54 CDT
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Hey, haven't reviewed in a while. This story makes me laugh so much. It's still romantic and gooey and all that good stuff, but the laughing quality is good. I think you said that someone called you the Al Yankovic of fanfiction. In some ways, I totally agree. I look forward to the next few chapters, the pain of labor, for both Inuyasha and Kagome, and now I'm off to get the image of Jaken and a fired Kikyo out of my head...
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