Reviewed By: Lennechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, good story. Wonderful first chapter, but you really shouldn't mix languages like in the sentence ""Father, Mother, nani does this legend have anything to do with my destiny?"" Cuz then, it doesn't sound very good, you know? Other than that, I enjoy your story. ^^
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