| "No Longer a Child" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I soooooo think you should do a threeway with the brothers and winry!!! I have been looking EVERYWHERE for one of those and can't find one. so...PRETTY PLEEEAAASSSEEE!!! *makes puppy dog eyes* oh yeah and the alxWin story you did was great! Very tastefully done!
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Reviewed By: cute_kittie_kait [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 04:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say I was very pleased to find this story. I always wanted them together. Was rather upset when that thought wouldn't come when he became a little boy again... so I thank you again.
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Title: YATTA!!!
Reviewed By: Chii. Hikari On: September 29, 2005 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so awsome, plz do more. Your story was sooooo cool. Plz write more fan fics like these, we need some more of these. =^^=Keep up the good work!=^^=
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Fanactic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hurray, you're such an excellent writer and I'm proud I've finally found an AlXWinry story. Quite Interesting to say the least. Hoping for more! X3
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Reviewed By: xjakotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. that was great! I loved it. I always thought Al and Winry would make a better couple than Ed and Winry, anyways. -hugs Ed- =) But I think that doing a three way between them would be a good idea. I'm a fan of EdXAl, sorry, call me strange. It's actually pretty.. interesting. XD
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2005 02:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I agree... please don't do a 3-way, incest is not cool, and that's strange to me that you were the first to write an alxwinry lemon... I would love to be the second... just give me a day or two!!! Just kidding good job!
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Reviewed By: asral On: July 28, 2005 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good. but i think if u do a 3-way it would be disgusting and it can happen like the guys making out w/ each other...(u have good grammar btw) and that is the 1st lemon fanfic about them. i already searched the whole fanfic community. if i'm not mistaken u r d only one that has alwinry lemon. ^_^ BE PROUD OF THAT!
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