| "Beautiful Night" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great little story! I really enjoyed reading it. You say this is your 26th? O.o ... I must go read some of your others, that I must. It was actually the first time I'd read a Malik/Yami before... maybe it's just me but they don't seem to be paired together that often?? In any case, I really enjoyed ALL the pairings you put into this, it seems like such a hard feat to have a story that focus's on the relationships of /so many/ characters. But you pulled it off nicely. Good stuff. Look forward to reading more from you. Cheerio~
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 19:19 CDT
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW....kawaii! lol, sex on the roof...imagine if one of them fell off? lol, that was the AWESOMEST fic ever! (ok, awesomest isn't a word...-_-) maybe you should consider a sequel? I'm not saying you have to, it's only an idea *shrugs* keep up the good work!
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Title: Ummmm
Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: September 29, 2005 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Sorry. It's not that you're a bad author or anything, it's just that this chappie got me into a bad mood y know? -_- anyways, please update yo story soon k?
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 18:22 CDT
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Two. More. Chapters?!?!?!?! *strangles you* HOW COULD YOU DO THAT??? HOW???? You: x_x me: *lets go* -_- *sob* why couldn't it be longer?? *sniff* well, this was a good chapter, but SETO and his PRIDE psh...the least he could do was buy some pjs for mokie, lol. update!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2005 18:22 CDT
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Two. More. Chapters?!?!?!?! *strangles you* HOW COULD YOU DO THAT??? HOW???? You: x_x me: *lets go* -_- *sob* why couldn't it be longer?? *sniff* well, this was a good chapter, but SETO and his PRIDE psh...the least he could do was buy some pjs for mokie, lol. update!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris (NLI) On: September 23, 2005 17:43 CDT
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This fic isn't going downhill. ^^; Yami reads porn..somehow, I don't find that surprising o_O lol, update!
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Title: review >w
Reviewed By: hanyou-cat On: September 16, 2005 21:32 CDT
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Oh my god i LOVED it! You should make one with more BakuraxRyou...i find it so cute! ^-^ oh,and i have to advertise this thing real quick before i end this thing..: Are you a demon? Do you love waffles? Then go to.....Sesshoumaru's Pancake and Waffle Bar! Sesshoumaru:Part of you villanized breakfast! :wink: o-o;; ok im done now.
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Reviewed By: LilyIris (NLI) On: September 16, 2005 16:32 CDT
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RyouxBakura finally ^^; me likey, so update soon!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris (NLI) On: September 06, 2005 09:08 CDT
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emotionally vegetabalized? lmao, jou and mai sittin in a tree..k-i-s-s-i OK OK!! I'll stop...sheesh...lol update!
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Reviewed By: LilyIris [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 17:43 CDT
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Hey this is great! This is going straight to my faves ^^ STUPID RYOU!! He's kawaii and all, but HE"S CLUMSY!! >_< Gah...Kaiba shoulda killed the guard when he had the chance. *knocks out guard from behind* There ^^ now the gang can get away! Bakura: -_- You're not part of the story...Me: ^^; I know that..i was just trying to help. ^^ Update soon!
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 15:07 CDT
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This isn't so bad, in fact I like it. But, I thought the story was suppose to be mainly about Bakura? You got to stay focuse on one person. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Cait Sith On: August 14, 2005 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was pretty good, just one problem. The story starts with its focus on Bakura, and the summary makes the story seem like it will continue to focus on him and his developing relationship with Ryou. But the story switches over to Malik and his story with Marik, ending with the resolution to his problem when the initial conflict, namely Bakura and Ryou, is pretty much left open. Besides that though, the writing style was good, and the general mood carried well throughout the fic. Nice job. :)
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Title: Now I reveiw you here...
Reviewed By: Tinkeu On: August 03, 2005 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! that was awesome once again! Hehe! *feels awkward switching between sites to review* Oh well! I hope to see more of this soon, it's a fun read and everything... is just.....spiffy! Hehe! You're a great writer (I think I've told you that before...but I could repeat that a thousand times cause it's true!) and I can't wait to read more! *claps and dances* ...Till next time!
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