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| "Speaking Through Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Title: haha hey me again
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 20:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah my review got cut off it was so long ^^ so this is what the rest said: I was just pointing a few things out; I wasn't trying to tell you how to write your story. But otherwise I love love love love the angst and how you described what Inuyasha must of went through. Anyways update soon!
| Title: hey
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, you reviewed my one story, True Love's Curse, and I wanted to thank you by reading yours ^^ Your review meant a lot to me because you gave me helpful criticism (by the way, I agree with what you said about detail. I kinda had a problem with that when I first started writing); I like reviews that give me tips more then reviews that are all like OMG YOUR ARE THE BEST WRITER EVER! (but sometimes those are nice too ^^)Anyways, I really am enjoying your story!! Do you mind if I point out a few things to you though? First off, I think Inuyasha's death should mean more to Miroku and Sango then a reminder that they aren't immortal. I mean, come on, they spent three years with him. He was their best friend. His death wouldn't just be a reminder. And the thing with Kagome's family, they would never ever act that way. But, maybe you have a reason to why they are acting that way so I won't go into that much. And lastly, the thing with the villagers. Even though in the show you don't see Kagome interact with them much, she is in their village a lot. I think that they would recognize her even as a half demon. I mean, she only has ears, claws, and fangs now. That's not that big of a difference. Also, they seemed fine with Inuyasha, so why would they freak out over Kagome, especially after they knew her as a human and knew how nice she was? And they would never ever turn on Kaede. Sorry for the super long review. And please don't take what I said personally. I was just pointing a few th | Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read alot of fanfics since I've been on MMorg....and it's been a long time since I've cried like this....I love this story so much....it is so good...I really really hope you post more.....I loved it!!!
| Title: WHA-?!
Reviewed By: Sothiaz On: August 02, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
what?! why do we have to beg for more chapters? please keep posting!!! this is the first original p[lot i have seen in a long time, and i enjoyed what you posted... PLEASE keep this fic going!!!
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