"The Price of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Miyammm On: September 15, 2005 20:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I absolutely love this story! I've seen a few AU worlds fics so I lowered the Originality rating, but everything else is really good. I have noticed a few sentances that seemed akward (not to many obviously or I would remember one to use as an example) but over all I thought your writting style was really nice. Direct and to the point but not blunt. And I can't say this enough. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Talaeka On: July 30, 2005 14:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It was really good you have to update it very soon! please. thanx
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