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"Strip Tease" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 27, 2005 11:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story but im not at all a big fan of kagome dieing... but great story.
 Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2005 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey io really liked your story! keep up the good work
 Reviewed By: EnchantedLadyK [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2005 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok the fic started out great it was fantasic i would probally say but then you got to the sad death part not that im saying that they were bad just that i dont think killing them was the best way to go with this story you need to loosen up on the death fics and start writting some happy ones because this one was really good i just though it could of been better with a not so sad ending and stuff and you need to put more detail in some places like how inu and kikyo were in a car why were they in a car together and stuff you know anyways overall great story could of been better keep up the good work.... Krystin
 Reviewed By: sunshine running wolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2005 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Loved it so write more!
 Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2005 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
update lemme see wat happens if its a good or bad thing!!=)
 Reviewed By: sunshine running wolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 05, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
I do not like the death fics better they suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can writ good but you need happier fics.

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