| "Royal Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngleAyeka On: July 03, 2002 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, but i think vegeta and Ayeka should be able to be together...They both love each other and should stay together. Who gives a crap about the guy she was supposed to marry? She doesn't love him like she does Vegeta...update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 15:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was sick, you have to write more!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: June 16, 2002 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUSTHAVEMOREMUSTHAVEMORETOREAD *goes starcraving mad* |
Reviewed By: Midnight Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why can't Aeka and Vegeta be together they're bonded damnit Vegeta would never be the same again if they took his mate away its so sad I want to cry. |
Reviewed By: Rogue13 On: June 10, 2002 20:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah!!!! I've waited and waited and you just made it worth while! =) I hope you keep updating. |
Reviewed By: angelryodo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has to be one of the best chapters you have ever writeen.I hop you continue soon.pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!.It keeps getting better and better. |
Reviewed By: M. BLADE On: June 03, 2002 04:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
*jumping up and down*.........
***:{(
nooooooo!!!!!!!
*has forgotten thought//spiffy comment*
*is sad*
!!!!!!!!!!! :})
YEAAAHH!!
*remembered thought*
NEH? and EH. (or a likeness of them) Came from Enders game!!!! I try to spread them around cause it sounds cool....
--I have once again public embarrased myself *sadness*--
BUT I LOVE THIS ARTICLE SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!
*affection*
:D
^_^
^_^ c^^nn (supposed to be a peace sign |
Reviewed By: M. Blade (sophomore psychopath....kinda) On: June 03, 2002 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD!! VERYY!!! EXCEPTIONAL//AWESOME//COOL
//WIICKED//KILLER//SWEET//WHOA!!!!!!! *Ahem* please excuse my spontanaety but it is 3:36 am AND I DON"T WANNA STUDY FOR MY FINALS. which are tommorow. BUT!____Loved the story!
a few words: if you are THIS GOOD at characterizing people (God knows how I can even "spell" that word) you should go into the novel business. Seriously, I may be a [tad] disgruntled, but you have SERIOUS author talent in you.
Sincerely, the [slightly] disgruntled M. Blade *;]) please write more.... I get bored at.... 3:40 am
seriously though, good stuff
{{this has been unedited and spontaneous, I am not crazy or a pshyco or anything, It's just I hate finals. A lot. THank you and endkjoy your dkjday!}} |
Reviewed By: bakaneko On: June 03, 2002 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooo fun! I love this fic, I love the plot, the characters and i'm left in total anticipation... you should write more.. fast... i'm a fanfic junkie... it's like sticking a needle in my arm and forgeting to inject the rest of the story! *insanity ensues* The way you manage to make the characters personalities and histories entwine so perfectly is amazing.. I wait impatiently for more... and of course for the two lovebirds to figure some thing out ;) *cackle* |
Reviewed By: AngleAyeka On: June 02, 2002 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic...Please update soon... |
Reviewed By: AngelAyeka On: May 08, 2002 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved this fan fic I think it's so cool how Vegeta and Ayeka are finally showing their feelings to each other.I hope you put up the next chapter soon.I really like this fic.Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Lane On: May 03, 2002 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i can say is that it is allmost perfect.You have done a great job. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2002 13:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
you evil lil turd. you stoped. *crys* i need more *continues to cry* you meany *teary glare* you stoped a really good fic right there.
love it must read more ASAP,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Dark Prince [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am impressed. It takes a lot to interest me and
I like your work, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Huggle_my_spike [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2002 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good story! I like the Ayeka/Vegeta pairing, you make them look really good together! my only thing though is i dont think Vegeta would try to scrounge some free douhnuts, a bit below his character. I also like the attraction going on between Ryoko and Goku, or at least from Ryoko's side, i think you should countinue it! overall, great pic! keep up the goodwork! |
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