Reviewed By: bowhawk00 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was somewhat entertaining. The problem pertained to the descriptions. If the descriptions were more vivid, I might have been able to understand the atmosphere of this writing.
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