| "First Anniversary" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 23, 2005 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: Spirit Bagel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You captured the reluctant tenderness of their relationship perfectly, and did a nice job with Mukuro's test as well. Although, I don't think Hiei would beg for it like that...he has an irrational amount of pride, even around Kurama. Still, it was good, as far as hentai is concerned. Please continue writing.
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Reviewed By: Blue Utopiah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There just aren't enough good Hiei and Kurama lemons out there. This is one of the good ones. I don't care if it's old, I liked it! All around goodness - well written, not too long, you mixed it up a bit with the lemon, it wasn't the same old thing I always read (I like Kurama rolling Hiei up on his shoulders). Please - if you have any other "old fics", post them!
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Reviewed By: hellcat805@yahoo.com On: July 31, 2005 02:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
it may be old but i thought it was really good. XD;
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