| "The Power of Ai" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Nyuka
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello its kinda funny i read you continuation befor i read the first part but it still loved and im glad i read the second part first bacause i would have been upset about kagome turning to stone...i think you are good at writeing you have a talent for it i saw this story as if it was a movie.... actruly it could be a realy good move if it turned out the way you wrote it :) well im glade i was able to read your story i hope that chaper ten in you second part of your story was or will be fixed i sooooooooo want to read that chapter... :)
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 05:59 CST
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Ok so maybe i missed it but what or who was "Ai" ?? Also, Will their be a part2? or a continuiation? i want know more :)
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 14:01 CST
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Kagome is awesome at archery. She totally deserves to win that contest! I'm glad that Inuyasha didn't give her any grief about going home though I wonder how he'll react when she shows up with Kouga!
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 13:48 CST
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What an action packed chapter that was. A lot sure happened. I'm glad that Inuyasha finally made his choice! Way to use those miko powers, Kagome! PS Sorry it took me so long to get back to this.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:43 CST
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Kagome what a silly girl to exhaust herself and not eat like that. it would be nice to have Inuyasha serve you hand and foot though! At last they have a lead on Naraku! Excellent! But I will have to continue reading this later.
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Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:33 CST
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Lol! Inuyasha sure takes a lot of showers at Kagome's house!! I for one wouldn't mind hanging out in the hallway!! SOOOooooo close! Kagome is right now not to give herself to Inuyasha until he knows his own feelings. Personally I think he's got problems because of his intense loyalty which probably comes from his dog demon nature. I think that both his dad and Sessh are the same that way - one they like you you're their friend for life!!
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Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:25 CST
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Hehehehe! Yes I forgot to say anything about Inuyasha trying on Kagome's thong. That was hilarious. You really do good descriptions. Like Inuyasha and Kagome coming out of the shower. Hey for once they didn't kill the rampaging demon - alright Kagome for figuring that out!! I'll bet Inuyasha would have an awesome singing voice too. I really liked your song too - very heartfelt! Now everybody knows about Miroku and Sango though that was pretty rude of Kagome saying that! Wow! I thought she was Sango's friend!
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:08 CST
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Yay! A Miroku and Sango chapter!! Thanks for that. Miroku is my own personal favourite guy. Sango is a veeeeerrrry lucky girl!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 15:03 CST
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What! He's going to tell her? Well its about time I'd say. How could he even think about going with Kikyou now that #$%^@&* showed she really didn't care about his feeling at all when she tried to force herself on him!! What a bag!!! (just a side note - you should make more paragraphs so its easier to read. I keep losing my place. ARRRGH!)
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 14:48 CST
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Cool archery contest! You really described it well - I could so see it! Hojo better watch out or he's going to end up getting creamed. Nice touch making it the night of the new moon so Inu can go see her at achool!
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Reviewed By: listersgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 14:37 CST
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This is a really interesting idea having Inuyasha reveal his true feeling without being able to help himself. So far its been working for him. I can only wonder what kinds of things he'll have to say to other people!!
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