| "Bruised and Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: glasses freak [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn tht was fwaking awsum ( & yes i mean FWAKING lol ^^) tht was soooo good, i hope u cont., ur a real good writer
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Reviewed By: WatcherWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. A very enjoyable read.
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Title: (cfox on Fanfiction.net)
Reviewed By: rc1ca On: July 31, 2005 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the ending of this story . I would like a little more "fun" but very well writen . the only complaint I have is I doubt Ryo would kiss Kayzuama in front of the Holy persenonal. still all and all a good story. and I hope to see more of your writing . weather here or at Fanfiction .net cfox
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are very good at decribing the story. I not exactly hate it but it's not my fav either. Somewhere in the middle. Anyway very good so far.
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