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"Unexpected Disappointments & Unbelievable Surprises" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]

Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 20:37 CST
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Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10

Comment/Review:
You should work on your writing. There are so many fics out there where Kikyo and Kagome are sisters, and Inuyasha is cheatings on Kag and Kik. We really don't need another. I found it hard to read since all your paragraphs were so long. And for someone who just found out her sister was with her boyfriend, Kagome took the sight of them rather well. I suggest you either scrap the story, or at least rewrite this chapter.

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