| "Becoming one of you" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, your story line is awesome... but I think that your grammar, and paragraphs need work. Like, get a beta or something. I'll do it! Anyway, please update!
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Title: Man!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was an interesting beginning to be honest. I am amazed that you haven't gotten any reviews on it >< And this fanfic has been written quiet a long time ago *sighs* Will you be updating it? Or perhaps add another chapter? I'd love to read more. Thanks ^ ~
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i hope you update soon. well i will R&R more and more. oh and please read my new story moonlight eyes. thanks
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