| "Sacrifices of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: sirenmergirl On: October 17, 2010 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe. Kagome and Inuyasha haven't even met yet. I was really looking forward to that part.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOh, just popped into this! I like the premise of it, and do hope you can continue it. ;)
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Hm... yeah you do need a BETA but not that badly you only had a few errors. That were mainly minor spelling ones. But my opinion of the story is that so far it is really good. I love the story line. Though I deathly hate how Shippou is includes I despise that little furball. =D But other than all of that your story is so far awesome. I hope you dont give up on it. Because that would just suck. lol
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Reviewed By: lakoda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Grrrr. I like the story its just....you never update! hurry up please! Anyway keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Kag15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 21:23 CST
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I really like the story line so far...keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 On: September 24, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, but you had too much of the telling of the background and not enouph of the caracters talking to eachother. You should have a lot of scenes when kagome and inuyasha are together. That would make up for earlier. Kay? ok. But I still liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Little Owl On: September 23, 2005 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! Fantastic!Fantastic! Everything in this story from prologue when introducing the landscape and situation, to the character relations, plot and life is bloody brilliant!!! So, are Inu and Kag gonna meet in the next chapter??? Please Please PLease update soon!!! They're my favourite couple!!!!
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Title: leave
Reviewed By: me On: September 23, 2005 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
leave everything the same i lkie it the way it is. different people in every scene that good o lot of writrier dot know how to do that a do it good too. good story update soon. keh i love this story and let inuyasah have no intrest in kikyou only kagome. not a kikyou hater but kagome and inuyasah belong toghter.
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Reviewed By: ahda On: September 20, 2005 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That as good! It was kinda boring though.
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Reviewed By: hanyougirrl On: September 19, 2005 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still here waiting for you to update so what r u waitin 4?!! update soon
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Title: Hi^^
Reviewed By: lynx9 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reding and enjoying much. GLad you're writing again. Just back for London, Keep going. Ciao
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Reviewed By: hanyougirrl On: September 11, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon can't wait
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Reviewed By: lakoda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so update soon
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Reviewed By: inujunkie On: August 11, 2005 14:37 CDT
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u dont give urself enough credit. this is a great story so pls pls pls update soon
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Reviewed By: lakoda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story so update soon and thanks for the great story
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