| "Son of the Hawk" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 16:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice story to bad its discontinued.
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Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on the story so far, I'm hoping that you'll update be posting more chapters.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this fic is anything but complete, but I doubt it will be continued anyways. The basic idea isn't to bad, nor is it incredibly orginal. All things considered I could imagine this fic going places. I do feel you could of taken things a little slower, just about all the peoples reactions seem a little fake and forced. Most them could of been accepted a little easier if you dived into their thoughts a little more, and perhaps gave a little more fluid dialog. Most of it is rather quick and to the point, getting the facts out soon as possible. You never really got to any hentai bits, so you can't even really write off the weak story to it being a lemon, which silly dialog and OOC behavior is usualy over looked.
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Title: Dr. Nutcase
Reviewed By: HolyKnight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...this is bloody good...but WHEN IN THE NINE HELLS YOU'RE GOING TO SODDING UPDATE!? WE'RE WAITING DAMMIT!!
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Reviewed By: Rowinr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far i do hope you keep updateing it i am looking forward to where it is going.
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Title: Chap 3
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 04:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN I am loving this so far! I can't wqait for the HELLACIOUS beatdown that Genma's gunna get and the rest of the NWC ESPECIALLY Ryouga and Kuno as well as Akane! *Starts Making Popcporn* Momma's little baby loves shortning shortning... Mamma'sd little baby loves shorning Bread.
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