| "Silent Melody" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: EvilBallOfFluff [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should really update this!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 19:53 CDT
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Just read this for the 2nd time -- I love it! It's been a long time since you've added to it -- I hope you plan to finish it. It's such a good story!
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 09:46 CST
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Oooooo...I can't wait for you to update, I'm loving your story so far!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 13:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter, can't wait to see what Hiei's thoughts are about waking up snuggled up to Kagome like that. Update soon please
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Title: LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was soooo coooool!!! I was so cought up in reading the chapters, that I didn't notiest anything wrong! But I really do love the way you put your fanfic together! please update VARY soon!!!!! JA-NE!!!!!!!!!!!!!*^_~*
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 14:48 CST
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Yep, I agree with Rainstorm61879... far too long since an update, and there ARE a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. But it's still great ^^
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: October 04, 2005 22:42 CDT
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Been far too long since you updated. There were a lot of gramatical and spelling errors this time. Take your time to proofread your story atleast once or twice and you'll clear up most of the mistakes.
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
On chapter 4 the part at the bottom doesn't seem to make much sense, especially the paragraph just under the last scene change. Parts seem to be missing here & there & the thousands & thousands makes NO sense since it was only 500 years since Kagome shattered the jewel & the gang went questing. So that paragraph needs a bit of an overhaul.
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Reviewed By: KrazedKawaiiKitsune On: September 30, 2005 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seriously need to update and soon. You have an awesome story going on here and you should really make more chapters :D. Anyways update soon.
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Reviewed By: rainshower16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 19:36 CDT
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i really love your story and i cant wait until you update it!
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 19:41 CDT
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OMG, I love it! Update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 17:02 CDT
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good chapter, can't blame her for being the way she is. First being attacked by Hiei and then Naraku. ENough to ruin anyones day. Good chapter, please update soon
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 12:10 CDT
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Love it! I've never read a story like this before!
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 03:39 CDT
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If you want a beta reader (Provided you don't already have one.) My e-mail is Rainstorm61879@hotmail.com
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Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 03:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
First you might get more reviews if you allow those not signed in to review. Second there isn't a lot to review on but I like it so far. You have grabbed my intrest I'll be watching for updates. You do have some grammar problems but that's all cosmetics so to speak. They can be fixed.
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