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"Silent Melody" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ]
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 Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2005 14:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Yep, I agree with Rainstorm61879... far too long since an update, and there ARE a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. But it's still great ^^
 Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI  On: October 04, 2005 22:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Been far too long since you updated. There were a lot of gramatical and spelling errors this time. Take your time to proofread your story atleast once or twice and you'll clear up most of the mistakes.
 Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 04, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
On chapter 4 the part at the bottom doesn't seem to make much sense, especially the paragraph just under the last scene change. Parts seem to be missing here & there & the thousands & thousands makes NO sense since it was only 500 years since Kagome shattered the jewel & the gang went questing. So that paragraph needs a bit of an overhaul.
 Reviewed By: KrazedKawaiiKitsune  On: September 30, 2005 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You seriously need to update and soon. You have an awesome story going on here and you should really make more chapters :D. Anyways update soon.
 Reviewed By: rainshower16 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 11, 2005 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really love your story and i cant wait until you update it!
 Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2005 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG, I love it! Update ASAP!
 Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 06, 2005 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
good chapter, can't blame her for being the way she is. First being attacked by Hiei and then Naraku. ENough to ruin anyones day. Good chapter, please update soon
 Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2005 12:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it! I've never read a story like this before!
 Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2005 03:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you want a beta reader (Provided you don't already have one.) My e-mail is Rainstorm61879@hotmail.com
 Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2005 03:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
First you might get more reviews if you allow those not signed in to review. Second there isn't a lot to review on but I like it so far. You have grabbed my intrest I'll be watching for updates. You do have some grammar problems but that's all cosmetics so to speak. They can be fixed.
 Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2005 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
*chuckles* That meeting could have gone better for the both of them. I'm sure Hiei is not going to be amused with that outcome. Hopefully it won't turn into too brutal of a fight, I'd hate to see either onf them maimed. Good chapter, I look forward to the next one. Update soon please.
 Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2005 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTIUE ...very ggood start
 Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please update ASAP!!!! i love the story so far ^_^ please update!!!
 Reviewed By: LadyAmamizu [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2005 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well this seem very interesting, and other than a few spelling mistakes it was really good please update soon
 Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 31, 2005 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a very good start, I look forward to seeing where you take this story. For some reason MM is not sending alerts to me any longer when a story is updated so I'll check frequently in hopes there is a new chapter up. Update soon please.
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