| "She Walks In Beauty" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: merrijane21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 17:39 CDT
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Hello...I just wanted to say I've enjoyed this fanfiction and was wondering if you were going to continue it. I would really like to see how it turns out and ends. Do you end up putting Kagome and InuYasha together or not? Well Thanks for reading this and I look forward to seeing if you continue with this fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: KAZ1167 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2006 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! this is such an amazing story, i don't understand why you aren't getting reviews. its beautifully written.
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is sooo good i can't wait for the next chapter please don't stop updating update soon peace
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Title: It's very good
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 09:22 CDT
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So far i like it alot. It's original & well written. I think you should continue if you're really feeling the story. I write because i like it and if i can get even one person to enjoy a story it was worth the time. Don't let a lack of reviews stop your talent :-D
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 00:12 CDT
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Nice chapter. I think that kid that appears all the time by Kagome is Naraku's child, right? Oh, and people are too lazy to log into mediaminer half the time, so adjust your profile so they can review your story without logging in and you will probably have more people review your story. I hope you don't stop writing it. It's very good so far.
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Reviewed By: mm-reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 00:02 CDT
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I think you have predecessor mixed up with successor. That new miko in the village is Kaede's successor because she comes AFTER Kaede. And the new enemy is Naraku's successor because he comes AFTER Naraku. Pre means BEFORE so predecessor would means BEFORE Kaede and BEFORE Naraku. I think you should fix that because it is mixing me up. I like you story though, so keep updating it. And you'd get more reviews if you let people that are not signed in leave a review.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 19:32 CDT
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I can't wait to read about Inuyasha's reaction. Keep going; it's great. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 12:01 CDT
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It's still interesting and I like it, but I need to point out that 'predassesor' is spelled wrong (it should be 'predecessor') and it does not mean 'son'. 'Predecessor' means the one that precedes or came before (like an ancestor), so Naraku's predecessor would be Onigumo. Maybe you meant to write 'descendant'? Anyway, I was confused when you wrote 'predecessor' and then wrote 'son' because they are opposite. Other than that, you are doing fine with your story and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really enjoyed this twist on the usual Inu leaves Kagome fic. Very interested to see where you will take it. Please do keep writing!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 20:24 CDT
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This is very interesting so far. I hope you update soon. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 13:48 CDT
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Great prologue. I want more.
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