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| "Afraid Of The Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Lacquestar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2002 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I will not be lying when I say that has to be one of the most emotional stories I have ever read, and so well written, almost like poetry. You can tell a story is good when you feel sorry for the bad guy who killed thousands of people. I also like how it was about Frieza, not enough stories about him at all. Original character Furozen was very good as well. Oh god, that was so sad, a part of me wishes I didn't read it cause it was so sad.....
I like how you did the part about Frieza dying and his mind going blank. And then the new star in the sky. Very well done. I hope you continue to write more stories, fanfiction needs more authors like you. Only next time, can you try to write something a little happier? | Reviewed By: IceJin On: January 05, 2002 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sad! I read this on ff.net and noticed you made a few improvements.....I like it! I've never seen a writing style like yours before, and it's awesome! Poor Frieza... | Reviewed By: Kiyoko-Kiyone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2002 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing style is very beautiful...and even though I hate Frieza...I felt for him...such a sad sad story. Writen very well. What song was that? | Reviewed By: gold_fish [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2002 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your style of writing! It was really great! I do that with emails and it never occured to me to do that in a fanfiction though, don't worry I won't take your style! I really liked it, and the story was really good as well! I can't wait to read more. | Reviewed By: ~*Universe*~ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2002 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg.....omg.....I've never read a fic like ths before! Your style of writing is almost poetic, and the way you tweaked the fonts...omg. It's like I was there inside the chars as everything happened, and even though the plot was very simple, you made it seem much more complicated and three-dimensional. I felt Frieza die, I saw Furozen cry and felt her grief. I could see her holding him. Speaking of: I really like Furozen as a char. She's soft, yet hard, and I really enjoyed the way you portrayed her feelings towards Frieza and vise versa.
I'm nearly at a loss for words and rambling here *sniffles* and I'm crying too. Poor Frieza.
Great story. I hope people review this because it very well deserves the praise, and anyone who flames it...well...they're just stupid :)
BRAVO!! |
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