Reviewed By: The Schizo of Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 12:20 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Awwwwh, this is such a cute story !! I don't mean to bother you but there are some typos in the story... That doesn't lower my ratings though, I think it's great ^^ The plot is kind of speedy... But okay, my first story was like that too, I don't blame you ^^ Please update soon, I'd love to know what happens next -^^- ~*~Schizy~*~
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