"G-Boys Write Up A Storm! aka Mission FanFiction" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: kkjade On: September 28, 2003 23:50 CDT Comment/Review: This is good What a great laugh. Hope you passed that test.
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Reviewed By: Hotohori4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 15:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the COOLEST ever! I love it. "Treize Kushrenada was an evil, evil man. fast forward to* "Drinking wine all day long, and proclaiming about the beauty of "war", that he never fought in." AND of course attached to, "But Treize's evilness was only surpassed by one man. Zechs Marquise." ROFLMAO!! And Duo was just perverted, and Trowa, who'd thought it of him! All of them, (except Quatre!) showed their over-inflated egos in this story. I don't care WHAT Duo says, I MUST review, and I MUST see what will happen in chapter 2!!! |
Reviewed By: krazy_kitty_katz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 12:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: its soooooooo good! (i dont kno if i got the scale right! i based on 10 being very good! just FYI) i hope you write another chapter!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zowe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2002 22:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I have to say that this fic is very original. I find script format to be hard to read. I'm not quite sure when they're speaking, thinking, or doing. So if you could find someway to differentiate between them I would really appeciate it. I like how what each pilot writes perfectly reflects their personalties, and that they're all in character. Keep up the work. |