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| "Saving Grace" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Both On: July 20, 2003 22:19 CDT
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About your Author's not, I would say both. Good fic | Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2002 21:11 CDT
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Nightfall,
In case you are reading this, well I just want you to know that no I do not mind your replies to my chapters. In fact I rather enjoy reading them, so you are definitely not bad at leaving reviews.
As for liking Alone better than this well in my personal opinion I have to agree with ya. Giggles. Yeah I know I shouldn't say that but shrugs I'm a yaoi fan through and through. I only ended up doing this because so many peeps asked for it. Oh well.
And You will most likely see more of my stuff floating about on Mediaminer, though I only rarely check out this site anymore. I tend to lean toward ffnet more often. Well hope to see ya around and glad you enjoyed teh fic. ^_~ | Reviewed By: Nightfall....again On: September 03, 2002 15:29 CDT
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Hey, sorry I didn't write when you first put that out. This is the first time I've been back over here in awhile... heck, this is the first time I've been on the computer without people running around behind me. I can concentrate enough to read your fic!
Also, I wasn't sure if you wanted another review from me. I seem to write too long and too often.. sorry.
Anyhow. Yes, it was a very good fic, though I must admit I liked Alone better. And SeijixTouma lemon over MiaxRyo is my opinion on that.
Hope to see more of your work around here. And sorry for all the rambling I've done while trying to write a decent review for you. I'm not very good at these. | Reviewed By: Nightfall On: May 22, 2002 15:13 CDT
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That was... interesting. Sorry this isn't longer. I thought I should post something, But I haven't got the energy for anything long. I've picked up a nasty cold. | Reviewed By: Nightfall On: March 29, 2002 12:44 CST
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Oh man, I can't wait to see how Rowen takes to the social worker. He doesn't seem the type to just open up and talk to a total stranger about all his problems. If he told him/her the truth ("I tried to kill myself because my friends and lover are trapped by this Temple thing, see, and they've been gone 'bout three years, and I can't figure out the answer that will set them free..."), he'd probably be on a one way trip to the looney bin. Heh Heh Heh. That should be... interesting. ^_^
Anyhow, I like this chapter. And sorry for the babbling up above. I definately like the Doc in this, poor guy. And thanks for clearing up the voice thing.
Well, I hope to see the next chapter soon. See ya!
P.S. Do I write these things too long? Sorry. | Reviewed By: Nightfall On: March 18, 2002 22:02 CST
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Ok, I won't bug you long this time. Thanks for putting up a new chapter!! Was the mysterious voice the voice of the Temple fella?
Well, looking forward to the next part! I gotta go now. Talk to ya at the end of the next chapter!
Sorry So Short.
Great Fic!! | Reviewed By: Nightfall On: February 04, 2002 15:43 CST
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And I'm back... again. Thanks for clearing that up. Yes, I did read Alone. looks very sheepish But I forgot it. Sorry. I thought I remembered it one way and it was really another... oh boy. Ok, so, thank you for helping me! And please write more! Talk to ya again when you have another chapter!
You gotta earn my conversation lol! I take new chapters as payment!! ^__^;; | Reviewed By: Wildfires Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 22:27 CST
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Dear Nightfall,
I'm posting this here since I don't have your email to email ya. The answer to your question is that Rowen did in fact slice his wrists before Mia could get to him. If you have read Alone, you will see that Ro has scars on his wrists from his attempt but they disappear when time is all reversed. I know it's weird. Grins. Anywho, He did manage to slit his wrists and then was upset that Mia found him. He had thought she was going to be gone longer. And they are lovers for the one night after he gets out of the hospital. You'll see when I get that far. Winks. I hoped that helped you somewhat iithout confusing you terribly. Chow. | Reviewed By: Nightfall On: January 22, 2002 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, first off, I am so sorry for not coming back for awhile. But, hey, this was a really nice surprize to have waiting now that I have poked my head back in here. Thank you for writing more! And please continue to write. I promise I'll come sooner this time.
Also, I'm sorry about your cousin. I know how it hurts to lose a family member, especially if they are close. So, once again, I'm sorry.
I would like one thing explained though. I don't totally get this chapter. You said this was mostly a flashback, right? And, from the therapist paragraph, this is Rowen's first suicide. (Not to say there was a second.. I think) Which means the guys are in the Temple. Ok, got all that.
But, the part I don't get is the hospital thing. I though she saved him before he actually did it and they were "lovers for a night".
Do you understand why I'm confused? Or did I just confuse you? Sorry.
Please write more soon! :-) | Reviewed By: Nightfall On: January 04, 2002 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was sad. But I liked it. You are going to write more, aren't you? Hope so, you can't just leave 'em hangin' like that. So, I eagerly await the next part in this. Please post (and write) it soon! |
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