| "Going Down?" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 20:38 CDT
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Awww, Ryou is so cute! ^_^ Please continue soon, I can't wait to see what's in store for Yugi ^_~ ~Tori-chan~
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Reviewed By: Change_of_Heart13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! This story is awsome.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, very intriguing story you have here. Lovely and cute. Ryou! *sqeals* Love the pairings, the perfect look-alike couplings. ^_^ And Ryou wants revenge, meh heheh, evilness and fun! I definitely enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next ch. soon. See ya. ^_~
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Title: *Clings to Yami*
Reviewed By: FourthYami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definately hot!! ^^ Hope you update soon, I wanna see what happens! :D
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it a lot, I hope that you update it soon, it'd be a shame if you didn't continue this fic. Keep up the good work please.
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Title: Just wondering
Reviewed By: VictimOfCircumstance [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 18:56 CST
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I was wondering... no offense, but I noticed that you have many spelling and grammar errors in your writing. Could I possibly be your beta? I'd read your completed work before you published it and fix all errors that I find, plus point out things I found confusing. I'd also check all three of the chapters already published, if you would want to repost them with correct grammar. I'm not insulting your writing, as I really do enjoy reading this fanfic, but I know that sometimes incorrect use of words turns people off from fanfiction, and I don't want people to avoid this one because of a mistake that would have been easy to fix. Anyway, message back if you want, or you don't have to if you don't want to.
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Title: * snuggles Ryou*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 08:23 CST
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He's so freakin' cute!!! I can't wait for Ryo's revenge. (Is doing it with Bakura really a BAD thing though? And then being thrown into a near-orgy? With the hottest twins, and of course, Yami, who oozes hotness?)
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Reviewed By: Darkness Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 16:14 CST
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write the second part!!! i want to read it!! >.< awesome story!
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Title: Lol
Reviewed By: Lil goth Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! please update soon, if you have the intention!
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Reviewed By: Yami Lover On: August 13, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhh.... the sweet teast of revenge. Update soon, I won't to read Ryuo revenge.
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Title: >:D
Reviewed By: me On: August 04, 2005 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooohh... revenge... >:D I loved 'Going up?' Update soon ^__~
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