| "Training for the Job" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2006 21:13 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice! keep'em comin
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: DarknessReader [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story lol. I want updates! But I know, from personal experience, that writting takes time, still though, your faster than I am, and i love everything in it/
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fanfic plzzz update!!!
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Reviewed By: InuFan545 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!!! PLZZZ UPDATE ASAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 19:11 CST
Comment/Review:
could u shorten your notes too?
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Could you maybe bold your A.N. notes it'll be easier to separate notes from the story
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Title: Soo good
Reviewed By: kpkchq [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omG damn u and that horrible cliff-hanger bahh. soooo goood *Hail David the aLmighty*
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Title: Training For the Job
Reviewed By: Tsunadi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AMAZING!!! PLZ KEEP UPDATING! I love your fanfic and check every day to see if you updated!
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Title: write more, ummm,plz?
Reviewed By: Naota On: September 27, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would like to read more, so...ummm plz...just continue, (im still not good at this)
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Title: Training For The Job
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: September 21, 2005 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can we see a lemon of Sakura and Naruto having sex with each other?
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Title: Training For The Job
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: August 31, 2005 07:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Will Sasuke will escape his madness and what shock will shake Sasuke from his madness? I like the Inari/Hanobi pairing but will Hineta's mother not will allow this,I'm sure Hineta and their father will approve of Inari since I'm sure Hineta have heard about Inari from Naruto bragging about this mission about the Wave.
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Title: tip
Reviewed By: Zabi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ninja you talk about in your note at the eng of this chapter are from rain not from mist. i mean the ones from that filler with the brother of ibiki
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: PRoyalAngel2004 On: August 09, 2005 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello. yeah u did it paragrahs. I luv it.
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Title: Tips
Reviewed By: PRoyalAngel2004 On: August 08, 2005 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here's a tip in how to improved ur writing. I luv the storyline and all, but u just have to remember to put paragraphs in ur story. It's really hard to read if u bunch the sentences together. It could really hurt people's eyes. I hope u get wat Im talking about.^__^
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Reviewed By: Deviant666 On: August 06, 2005 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. Keep it up. Although.. Sasuke emmiting pheromones? Ooook, 'someone' has a lot of imagination.. :P
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