"Black, Black Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: foxkit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 01:48 CDT Comment/Review: Niiiiiiiice. I really enjoyed the writing style, simalar to a poem, and it was really...just wow. ^ ~ I love Ryou-san! Anyway, I think maybe you should have REALLY emphasized Ryou's pain, but other then that I saw no flaws! Execellent work, I hope you do more stories like this...except w/out the death.....^ ^
| Reviewed By: Shadow Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 04:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Angst and NCS, what an combination. Nicely written and good style. Indeed a black heart, at least in this case. lol. Keep up the great work.
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