| "Take A Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Inuluver66613 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. I think that you should make it a longer story though. like start off with her trying to get Inuyasha then half way through she finds out about him and Jakotsu then after a couple days the thing with bankotsu happens where they get together like you wrote then they all find love and you make it a peachy little ending. thats just what i think you should do though, i would be SO happy if you did!
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 10:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute
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Reviewed By: anonomous_angel On: April 05, 2007 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All of your stories i've read so far have been very very good. Thia one had me a little choked up at the end but I liked the happy ending. The twist with jankotsue was a new one, havn't seen that before. It's a good story to read after a bad day, almost like one of those "it could be worse" things. Anyways good job and looking forwards to more. CHELLE
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Reviewed By: inukoro On: January 22, 2006 07:10 CST
Comment/Review:
that was kawaii! so sweet
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Reviewed By: deathsangel4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a really cute story!! Ban and Kag! I really like all of your stories so please write some more! lol. ~DA
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Title: Duh
Reviewed By: ShihanKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well heck yeah! i defineltely enjoyed it what are you an idiot?(no comment) your a great riter!
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Title: yes!
Reviewed By: yuni On: August 04, 2005 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that it is really good. But you could have wrote and ending to make it a little better. But all in all it was really good.
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