| "Heartbreakers" Reviews/Comments [ 700 ] |
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 13:20 CST
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i luv it... thats all i can really say. update soon.
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Title: Talk about wild pasts!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 23, 2005 07:02 CST
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Dayum girl! That was deep. I love that you weren't shy with it. Kouga & kikyou are gonna be issues...even though kik hasn't done anything yet. Poor Miro too. I feel sorry for everybody! Oh & that a/n was hilarious! Ain't it a damn shame that men are still saying shit like that?! Great update!!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 01:19 CST
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good chap!! it was really nice to see their histories and why they are the way they are...lol. damn that was an awkward sentence. :P lmao. but anyway, fantastico. ^_^ more soon i hope!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 18, 2005 17:03 CST
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HAHAHAH THE Mirkou flower club. Inuyasha right he going to get caught doing that.Sango talking about Kagome when she probably on the phone with Miroku planning to meet or something.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 21:44 CST
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WHY DID U STOP THESE ARE AMAZING STORY MORE PLEASE!!!!
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Title: Steppin?!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 18:49 CST
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*Runs around screaming* Giiiiiirl! You updated! I lurve the direction! I love how you're setting up Miro & sang too. The lies they're all weaving is going to make this HELLA interesting, especially now that you're about to add kikyou. This is gonna be so damn good! Woot!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like the new chapter! keep up the good work and plz update soon ~Candie~
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Title: DAMN!!!!
Reviewed By: ~witchy-angel~ On: December 02, 2005 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!!!!! u so HAFTA update, that fic was LIKE THE BEST!!!!! update or else!!!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter! keep up the good writing! can't wait to read the new chapter! oh and plz r&r No Name Sorry by sailormoon90225! i know that it has no title but i am new at writing stories so maybe you can give me some ideas on what the title should be that is if you want to? but anyways i really like your story!
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Title: Write more!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love this one.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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interesting start to the story. you have a lot of good material here. i like the idea behind miroku and inu as heartbreakers, cause they really so would be. you have a lot of bimbo's portrayed here, so i'm glad to see that kagome and sango are slightly more levelheaded (though i'm wondering about Kagome) sango is kick ass. i think you could use a little more description, maybe of internal thoughts or of surroundings. you have a lot of dialogue and a lot of very short sentences. though the front facade is great and halerious, there is little behind it. don't take it as a flame, cause it's not meant for it. i just feel like there is a little something missing. try instead of rushing through to get the nights done or what not, go into more characterizations about the individuals and their pasts or what not. you have a good story here!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 22:02 CDT
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Well, that was an ironic and very funny conincidence. Now Kagome has a date with a guy who's pissed at her fro one night standing him...This will be very interesting...
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 18:21 CDT
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nice story!!! very interesting take..I love the 2nd chap. how they were like "we got played" HAHAH! XD XD ^_^ i can't wait to see how this turns up. update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:24 CDT
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YOOOOOOOO!!! LOL!!! We got played....thats HILARIOUS!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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