| "Heartbreakers" Reviews/Comments [ 700 ] |
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Reviewed By: renomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that eas so funny! i cracked up when kagome told inu that she was a virgin! update soon! bye-bye!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:39 CDT
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OOO! No way! Awesome. Man, I almost feel sorry for them. Almost. Hahaha. i was laughing so hard at the end of the chapter. This looks like it's gonna be a very interesting story. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: ValliGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow that was freakin Fantastic!!! I soooooooo want to see what happens next. So please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! i liked the start of your story! looking foward to read more chapters of the story!! keep up the really good writing!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...THAT WAS SO FUNNY....Inuyasha and Miroku didn't see that coming....no pun intended....lol...that was really good....I'm really enjoying this story...it's different from some of the others I usally read....it's definatly a nice change....Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 16:13 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE!!
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Title: YUM!
Reviewed By: Risu_Bento [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KINKY-LICIOUS! I cannot wait until you update! Love from, Risu-chan
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Title: Heartbreakers
Reviewed By: raven rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! ( and still is! ) It's a wonderful begining. Please update!
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Reviewed By: fireflyskies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 15:37 CDT
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You have to update again soon. You are going to introduce the rest of the Inu gang soon, aren't you? Can't wait 'til the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Tyashaay14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg....I totally think I'm going to enjoy this one....that was so good...please post more!!!!
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