| "Heartbreakers" Reviews/Comments [ 700 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 21:44 CST
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WHY DID U STOP THESE ARE AMAZING STORY MORE PLEASE!!!!
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Title: Steppin?!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 18:49 CST
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*Runs around screaming* Giiiiiirl! You updated! I lurve the direction! I love how you're setting up Miro & sang too. The lies they're all weaving is going to make this HELLA interesting, especially now that you're about to add kikyou. This is gonna be so damn good! Woot!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really like the new chapter! keep up the good work and plz update soon ~Candie~
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Title: DAMN!!!!
Reviewed By: ~witchy-angel~ On: December 02, 2005 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN!!!!! u so HAFTA update, that fic was LIKE THE BEST!!!!! update or else!!!!
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Reviewed By: SailorMoon90225 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chapter! keep up the good writing! can't wait to read the new chapter! oh and plz r&r No Name Sorry by sailormoon90225! i know that it has no title but i am new at writing stories so maybe you can give me some ideas on what the title should be that is if you want to? but anyways i really like your story!
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Title: Write more!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love this one.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting start to the story. you have a lot of good material here. i like the idea behind miroku and inu as heartbreakers, cause they really so would be. you have a lot of bimbo's portrayed here, so i'm glad to see that kagome and sango are slightly more levelheaded (though i'm wondering about Kagome) sango is kick ass. i think you could use a little more description, maybe of internal thoughts or of surroundings. you have a lot of dialogue and a lot of very short sentences. though the front facade is great and halerious, there is little behind it. don't take it as a flame, cause it's not meant for it. i just feel like there is a little something missing. try instead of rushing through to get the nights done or what not, go into more characterizations about the individuals and their pasts or what not. you have a good story here!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 22:02 CDT
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Well, that was an ironic and very funny conincidence. Now Kagome has a date with a guy who's pissed at her fro one night standing him...This will be very interesting...
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 18:21 CDT
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nice story!!! very interesting take..I love the 2nd chap. how they were like "we got played" HAHAH! XD XD ^_^ i can't wait to see how this turns up. update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 16:24 CDT
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YOOOOOOOO!!! LOL!!! We got played....thats HILARIOUS!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: ameera4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 10:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Girl keep writing!!!
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Title: Heartbreakers
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: THAT WAS THE BEST SHIT EVER!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was hollering from the time i started til' the time i finished. You HAVE to write more. Holy shit...that was even better than he will be loved...everybody in my house was like, dayum what happened?! You R Da Shyt!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_kag_lover678 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 14:44 CDT
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omg that was so funny..kag and sango showed them...lol..love this story, so plz update ASAP..
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 10:36 CDT
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LUV UR STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE ASAP PLEASE UR STORY IS SOO KOOL!!
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