| "Trunks' Dad" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Crystalstorm21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Liked this story so far.Post more soon. |
Reviewed By: Hanastai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it!That was a great start. I'd like to read more, know where it all takes you. I'm guessing a conflictive father-son relationship between teenage Trunks and Vegeta?
Good stuff can come out of this.Your descriptions are very vivid.Please continue writing and update soon!
ja ne,
Ran-chan (Hanastai) |
Reviewed By: Goten On: January 21, 2002 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good plotline, i would like to see where it goes. |
Reviewed By: jessi On: January 18, 2002 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story so far. Please try to add more pages to, Please? It was an ausome story. |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2002 17:52 CST
Comment/Review:
nice intro, definitely promising. i wonder how the plot will unfold. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2002 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good teaser. I'd like to see where you take this one. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 04, 2002 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is too good and different to be a one-shot. I hope you keep the chapters coming. |
