Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: ChaoticReverie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2009 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a very cute story, full of wonderful fluff. Aside from a few grammatical and spelling errors, it was very good. There were also a few word mix-ups, like 'threw' where it should have been 'through', and 'taunt' where it should have been 'taut'... that sort of thing. Nothing big, we all make those sorts of boo-boos now and again. All in all, I thoroughly enjoyed this Cinderella rendition of Inuyasha. Keep it up!
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