| "Able to Please you" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
GREAT!!! U really caught Miroku's & Sango's persona. I laughed and smiled throughout the story. I really enjoyed reading it. In fact, I enjoyed it soo much, that I ref'd it to a few other people. U should continue writing.
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
As any lemon fan knows, it's hard to find decent sexual scenes in the world of fanfiction. Many are just smut or are written horribly. But I will admit that you pulled this one-shot off nicely. There were few grammar/spelling mistakes and it there was a decent plot line behind the lemon. Nice job. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inuyashaluvergirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW........just WOW...........
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