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| "Poetry section" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: sissy....
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so now your grounded, and depressed again rite? i'm so sorry i haven't been on.. i miss you so very much alyssa, and i wish i could talk to you! i miss writing poems together and i iss just talking about how we feel and those creepy times when we were listening to the same song at the same time...well, i love you sissy, and i miss you ...and i promised that i'd talk to you soon.. i haven't left a review in a while and now here i am writing one. i love you soooo much sissy and i always will. whenever you need me just close your eyes and open your heart to me. if you reach out, i'll pull you high into a sjy where no one can touch you. i swear. anything for you sister....
| Title: O_O whoa...
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...sissy that was just amazing...the poems especially the last two. wow. i loved them. oyu sounded so meaningful and sad...and a little triumphant in the last one, i just...wow that was amazing! i can't explain it...i'm gonna post the crimson sisters poems! like rite when i get home. i'm at school rite now, so i can't but i'm gonna print this out your new poems, and carry them around and copy thwem on the walls with a sharpie or something. i'm just...wow i love animespiral! because it gave me oyu! even though it erased my best stories and my poems i still love it. oh my sissy! your the greatest. i love you. keep on holding on, never lose sight of me when oyur finaly up in the greatest place of them all.....the tall buildiong with the rich people! (thought i was gonna say heavan?) nah sorry to get your hopes up peopls but no matter what, we're going to hell together to totally rock their socks and then kick them out. it'll be our bachelorette pad! lol keep it up sissy i love it and i love oyu and i miss oyu! ---KISA NIWATARI/ MEGAN/ YOUR SISSY ALWAYS
| Title: omg i read the new ones!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love them each one you write is amazing. like the way i tell you everytime i get the chance: yoiu ae a mazing and i just don't know what i'd do with out you. i've been depressed cuz i can't talk to oyu sissy. but i'll be there soon. i'm going to come and see my sissy. i love oyu sissy. alyssa, i miss you. i always think of you and it makes me feel better. no one can break that bond, i swear it. not even michael. i will alaways be your sister. crimson sister thorned sister SISTER SISTER ok? love you always, Megan/ Kisa niwatari keep it up girl, and ho.ld on for me ok? i'll catch you soon i promise.
| Title: O_O wow...my two faves again....
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok it's me sissy!!! i just want you to know again that you are the most amazing person i know. and also you know from my older reviews that i loved these poems. you capture an emotion perfectly with any thing you write and i think that is incredible! i really honestly hope that you will become the author i want to read about all the time and i only wish i could write like you. i want to post all the poems you and i wrote together in a story titled 'crimson sisters' but i need to ask you if you want too as well...lol i sound official or something. i think it was a really good stroke of luck or 'destiny' for us to have met. i loved your first review and i will love the last and all that's in between and you better know that. your the only friend i have who truly understands me and i am proud to be your sissy. i am proud, alyssa, that i can tell all my friends i would rather talk to you than shop at hottopic. i never pass it up unless it's for you. lol, sounds preppy, me comparing you to a store but i assure you i do not menat it that way. i want to give you long reviews alaways and keep reminding you what a fantastic writer you are and how honored i am to be your sissy! i think i already said that...? oh well! lol ok then keep it up AND THANKS FOR REPOSTING SAKURA BLOSSOMS FOR ME!! well for everyone but still!! lol loe you sissy, ---megan your crimson sis, thorned sis, sis, whatever else, FOREVER
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