| "Malicious Fate, Vindictive Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea for this story. everything is in flashbacks I just think that some more of the fic should be in the present or imediate past, (my opinion though). I believe that it would be good for Jin to tell the dream to Mugen soon or later. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fox Writer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 11:41 CST
Comment/Review:
great chapter! i love the emotions and details in this. Very nicely done. can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: triners On: September 17, 2005 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome, keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: shuichiinluv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far. ^-^ Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Kazu-kun On: September 13, 2005 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Write more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think it sounds rather interesting. please continue
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Title: Great ^^
Reviewed By: hitokiri.black On: August 14, 2005 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this one a lot and I am waiting for your next chapter. ^^
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Title: KICK ASS!
Reviewed By: koribaby On: August 11, 2005 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT! No other words to describe it other than AWESOME! Update soon! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!
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