| "You're So Damn Hot" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: November 02, 2006 04:43 CST
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*cracking up; can't breathe*!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 23:50 CST
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Finally, INDEED! How RUDE to leave us hanging there! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: vivenia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 21:44 CST
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OH... oh my... I can't stop laughing... Ken is lucky to be alive. That's great, I can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, wonderful: Aya seme, much myth busting (big hurray!), humor and heat. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: November 01, 2006 19:03 CST
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Hehehee. That was great. Entirely too fun.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 17:13 CST
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*runs in giddy circles* Yes! Finally! Woot- gotta love an agressive Aya. Ken can be so slow. Bring on the smut!
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Title: YES!!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 14:56 CST
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MY DEAR LORD!! COME ON GET TO IT!! THEY'RE FINALLY GONNA HAVE SEX!! . . .lol . . .Well, I happy the way the story is going, espcially Aya's personality towards someone he likes. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this one! The confusion and uproar is hilarious! More please.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 22:20 CDT
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*can't type, rolling on floor* MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: Trio Wing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 15:52 CDT
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O-O Ohh, Yohji, Yohji! ;-; Poor baby. Ken is delusional. :D And it's GREAT. ^^ Update soon! ^ 3^
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Humorous, sexy albeit very frustrating for our heros.
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 09:11 CDT
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LOL!!!! Omi is the best. THE BEST. He should do that in all fics. Great chapter! Very realistic sides of Aya.
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:58 CDT
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Woot! That was hilarious! Omi the little pervert! More of Aya and Yohji making out! Less of Ken butting in.
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:46 CDT
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you know, i'm one of the few people i know who's quite fond of AyaxKen...of course my interpretation of ken is a bit different than most, i suppose. i kinda wish he was stronger competition for yohji here, give him a run for his money, but it's quite obvious that aya erects for yohji and no other...and omi wanking to the surveillance camera is effing AWESOME. and oblivious aya, turning into leering aya, is exceedingly hot. i hope you get inspired to work on this some more soon.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:40 CDT
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Oh, that is...priceless. Awful, but priceless. I'm having a really hard time feeling sorry for Ken. Mostly because I want to hit him. Hard. I hope Aya and Yohji can work things out!!! More, please!!!!!!!!!
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