| "When Words Can't Describe" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:33 CDT
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Graet story! And I love the pairing. I don't think it's ever been doe before.
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Title: When Words Can't Describe
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Kwel!!!
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great I like it so far!!! I want to see some action!!! :3
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Reviewed By: MufaZu Drakon On: August 26, 2005 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome. You havae a good grasp of the personalities of the characters. And I know the pairing! *dances* Awsome to have hentai thoughts, ya? Aaaaaanywho! See you, hentai priestess. Teh MufaZu has spoken!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2005 11:14 CDT
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Hey this is a great story i love it soooooo much but i think that you need to make the chapters longer but i still love it and i cant wait to see what happends next and when the boys come in so update really soon thanks tootles.
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 01:54 CDT
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Hey, if the pairing has anything to do with Hiei and Kagome, I'll read it. So far, this is one of the best fics I've ever read!
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Title: When Words Can't Describe
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 15:04 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: I like it.
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! *^_^* Hiei and Yukina don't, you know... like each other that way do they? becuse you know... their brother and sister. In my opinyon that would be grose. that's like me and my half brother. *chokes* liking eachother that way. *gag, turns green* But if not, I LOVE YOU STORY AND HOPE THAT YOU UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!!! *^_^* P.S. This isn't a flame. I just didn't know what the relationship was between the two siblings was. sorry if I sounded mean I wasn't trying to. *bows deeply* GOOD JOB, KEEP IT UP!!!! *^_^* JA-NE!!!!!!!!*^_~*
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 02:14 CDT
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I'm ecstatic over your choice of pairing for this story. It's definitely original! Another good chapter, I can easily see how the girls would become so close to each other. Honestly out of all the YYH girls Yukina is the one I always envisioned becoming the closest friend to Kagome. Their sensitive nature coupled with how they are well aware of how cruel the world can be definitely compliment each other. At the same time Kagome's caring nature is just what I think Hiei needs to overcome the loneliness that his upbringing has demanded he endure. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work and please update soon!
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Title: When Words Can't Describe
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:10 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 09:46 CDT
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Good chapter if a bit short. I like the amount of detail you've gone into for it and you seem to have a good handle on Kagome and Yukina's personalities thus far. As for pairings. Hmm that is a tough one, you didn't post any warnings for the story. At least not yet anyway, I'd almost say Yukina was part of it. She seems to be very fond of Kagome and the priestess lives at Genkai's from the sounds of it. So if she isn't romantically attatched to her then I'd go out on a limb and say they are sisterly feelings towards the girl. If thats the case is Hiei part of the main pairing? If he is I will love you to death, there's far too few good Hiei/Kag stories out there. For the final member I really don't know there wasn't much in the way of clues. Can't wait to see what else you have planned for the story. Keep up the good work and update soon please.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a short chapter but a good story!!! please update soon ^_^
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