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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved this story since the first chapter and can't wait to read more, there are so many possabilities.
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Reviewed By: Anime_Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, you have to continue this fic - it's left in a place that you MUST continue it. Still, if you don't... oh well, I just hope you do.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Raa, looking forward to the next chapter whenever you have the time.
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good.
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Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like the mood and style update ASAP
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Reviewed By: Grand_Crusader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Just wow... Indescribable...very cool. Nice turn on the ear of the old "Shinji wants/needs lovin'"
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Reviewed By: yenom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this story is flowing, especially Ritsuko and Shinji's relationship how he is in charge but he is not purposely hurtful to her like most tend to write. That only make this wonderful, but then you add all the pay back he can do to his roommates and it just screams perfection. So please keep up this fantastic work.
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Title: Chapter 3 Review
Reviewed By: The Reanimated Raynor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you've gotten Shinji into the role he's made for himself. I also wonder how it's going to affect him, since he's realized that he's turning into that which he seeks to destroy. Will he embrace the role or will he play it grudgingly? Or will he change his mind? You've got a lot of places you can take this fic, and I look forward to seeing where it ends up. -The Reanimated Raynor
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Reviewed By: yenom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah another wonderful chapter, I love the hole shinji in change, please keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Oldwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2005 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A rather enjoyable story so far. Grammatically clean and an interesting storyline so far. How Shinji reacts now that he realizes that he's acting like his father should prove very interesting. I personally liked how you are portraying Ritsko and her reactions to her new master. When Misato finds out, her primary complaint will most likely not getting in on the action sooner.
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Reviewed By: The FMA [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 10:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think iots good so far but it couls be better and u should focus more on plot then the lemon scenes by speeding it up to them.
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Title: Practice Payback
Reviewed By: The Reanimated Raynor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, this is one of the few clichés present in Evangelion that can still be done well if written correctly, and your interpretation of the "Shinji needs to feel special/Shinji needs to get off" plot is excellent. To tell you the truth, this is the one pairing I never expected. You know, I'd have thought that the whole "Let Shinji be in control" theme of the date would have been Ritsuko's own idea, instead of Gendo's... well, order, I guess, but I suppose that's more a matter of taste than anything else. A note about the scenes leading up to the "date": They're very short. It's one thing to get the minimum of plot out of the way for a Lemon scene, but the fic still has to flow. Look forward to seeing the rest of the fic, should you decide to continue it. (And you'd better... -_^) The Reanimated Raynor
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Title: Oooh...ow.
Reviewed By: KoroshiyaZwei [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 10:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good fic so far. However, I wonder exactly how Shinji will react to that last bit at the end...that's got to be really reeeeeeally awkward.
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you have a great start, especially for an epic fic. This would be a great Ritsuko/Shinji fic if you work with it and explore it much deeper. (No pun intended.)
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Reviewed By: solaris389 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start. Wonder how you will handle everyones reaction.
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