| "Doctor's Orders" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 16:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad, intersting start. Sort of disapointed with the middle/end of the fic though. It seems overly rushed, and it's a bit disapointing his harem didn't include any the girls his own age. I would expected him to get Hikari just to piss of Toji and him back for using Shinji. Not to mention he could easily have felt Toji didn't deserve her, the way he always looking at Misato and other girls. Over all I liked the Shinji/Ritsuko pairing, but the rest the harem seemed rushed and a bit weak in plot and lemon secenes. Felt basicaly tacked onto a normal pairing.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 02:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice Job, Raa.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 09:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An awesome ending to a great story. I'm still looking forward to the prolog though, wanna see how Asuka reacts to everything.
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 02:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I haven't read many Eva fanfics, but this is the first I've seen where Gendo dies. Shinji's got his own little harem, but what happens now?
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 12:16 CDT
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Nice to see Shinji with a bit of backbone, even if it's only in the bedroom. Gendo is really going to wish he looked at that e-mail.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for anouther awesome chapter, I love the marriage angle and the interaction of the characters. I am so looking forward to everyone's reactions. Hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Rahhel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad at all.
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Title: Ritsuko
Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not often that Ritsuko get a fic that has her as one of the main charaters and isn't a bad guy to boot. Nicely done, although I wish you hadn't made Misato out to be so...self centered, I guess.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 16:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nicely done
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2005 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have loved this story since the first chapter and can't wait to read more, there are so many possabilities.
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Reviewed By: Anime_Ronin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, you have to continue this fic - it's left in a place that you MUST continue it. Still, if you don't... oh well, I just hope you do.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2005 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice Raa, looking forward to the next chapter whenever you have the time.
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Title: I like
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good.
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Reviewed By: SirOverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like the mood and style update ASAP
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