| "Valentine's-A Day For Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Yashagal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 22:03 CDT
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Good story. First tme I have read it. I hope you haven't given up on it. PLEASE CONTINUE (P.S. Who doesn't love IY?)
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Reviewed By: blackice3036 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 09:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it so far!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your new chapter i hope you update real soon.
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Reviewed By: JKWSMARTANDWISE On: August 22, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I THOUGHT THAT THIS FIC TRULY BRINGS OUT INUYASHA's TRUE FEELINGS FOR KAGOME REALLY WELL. I THINK THERE SHOULD BE A REALLY BIG INDEBTH LOVE SCENE BETWEEN MIROKU AND SANGO THAT BRINGS OUT SANGO'S TRUE FEELINGS FOR MIROKU. AT LEAST 5 MORE CHAPTERS WOULD BE TOTALLY AWESOME.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
update!!
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Title: update soon.
Reviewed By: acidburn00 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 03:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your doing a great job so far, the story is really good. What made me laugh the most is when you put, 'She's on her period.. to us demons that means she's in heat.' It makes me feel like your comparing them to dogs or cats haha. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Kuronue (too lazy to log in) On: August 10, 2005 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story so far. Ok, if you take this offensively then I'm sorry. This isn't a flame; I can't help but point out things that seem weird to me. In the second chapter Inuyasha asks Miroku an obvious question; if he realizes that he is an Inu-hanyou. I'm pretty sure that Miroku already knows this. When Kagome is getting Sango ready for them all to go the mall, you said that Sango loved all the dresses and skirts. To me this doesn't make sense because Sango seems more like a tomboy; would she really want to wear a skirt? In the Inuyasha series, people are almost always looking at Kagome weirdly because of her modern clothes. Would Sango and Miroku say something about the inappropriate outfits (at least to them?) Other than that it is an awesome story and I can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: crystalclearangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i loved your story please write more chapters for your story real soon thanks oh and please R&R my story moonlight eyes
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 19:35 CDT
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UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!C[=
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Reviewed By: SesshomarusNekoHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's cute! can't wait for the next chappie, so pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon. lol...sorry, i'm a lil hyper right now, it's like 1:00 am. you're doing a great job, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 20:43 CDT
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U HAVE GOT TO UPDATE PLEASE U HAVE TO OR IM GONNA KILL MAI SELF(just kidding)!!!=p
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Reviewed By: shessylover89 On: August 07, 2005 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! i hope u update asap!!!!!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: ani_girl On: August 07, 2005 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!! i really liked it... i dont think ive read one where sango and miroku go to her time..... hmmm... i would really like to read some more so could u send out another chap?? thanx!!! ^_^
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