| "Little Blossom" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Ana Morphin On: October 02, 2005 09:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its Great, i love it, its so funny! oh and the japanese of father is otoosan, at least thats what i usually hear, so, whens the next update? hope its soon, cause i enjoy it immensely, Take care!!!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: me On: August 23, 2005 15:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is just a test pay no mind
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Title: SORRY!!!
Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
SORRY!!! I mean 'Fathar' in Japanese is 'Oton-san'! I'm SO SORRY!!! Bye, MEvilBlossoms xxx P.S. PLEASE UPDATE SOON TOO!!! ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: fire fly On: August 18, 2005 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon i want to know who was in the kitchen was it Sakura? Please update!!
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Title: Little Blossom
Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo! Well done! Nice story, I actually think its really good! Keep it up! I WILL READ THE REST OF YOUR STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Thanks for a greta read so far! UPDATE! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms xxx P.S.PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! and 'Father' in Japanese is 'Okan-san'(I think...o.O)Bye... ^_^
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Title: Little Blossom
Reviewed By: erm. On: August 14, 2005 12:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
erm. i'm a new reader here. and seriously, i think you need to brush up on your grammer and punctuation. your story will be much nicer, and easier to read is you actually bother with the punctuation. i can't even understand your summary. but you write well, and the story line to creative. keep up the good work. i hope i will see improvements. good luck! and update soon! (p.s i decided not to rate you first, just in case you improve. then the rating will be WAY unfair. yupz. good luck!)
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Title: Little Blossom
Reviewed By: erm. On: August 13, 2005 08:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
erm. i'm a new reader here. and seriously, i think you need to brush up on your grammer and punctuation. your story will be much nicer, and easier to read is you actually bother with the punctuation. i can't even understand your summary. but you write well, and the story line to creative. keep up the good work. i hope i will see improvements. good luck! and update soon! (p.s i decided not to rate you first, just in case you improve. then the rating will be WAY unfair. yupz. good luck!)
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