| "The New Way to Paradise" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2005 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story I hope you update soon
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Title: editor again
Reviewed By: isha_hanyou_20 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I upped ur ratings since last tim. good chappie. keep on writin' (oh, btw, i updated lila, too) see ya, sista' -isha
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Title: good going
Reviewed By: ~godofthesky~ On: September 08, 2005 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey nice chapter. i hope you can keep editing. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 10:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
update! i love it already, must read more!
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Title: hmmmm
Reviewed By: isha_hanyou_20 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! It's ur faithful editor! Though I don't follow Wolf's rain, i do like the plot. it sounds good so far. Keep writin' sista! -isha
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: ~godofthesky~ On: August 12, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not as good as your fullmetal one but still good. all i can say is that you need to hurry up and add more. hope you keep it up. you're a good author
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Title: thanks
Reviewed By: moonalchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 13:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey kind of bad to right your own review but i want to thank the person who pointed out i spelled a word wrong. thank you
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Reviewed By: hellsbit_ch@hotmail.com On: August 09, 2005 13:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just a quick pointer for your story - The word 'sweat' is defined as "to excrete salty moisture from glands of the skin". The word you probably meant to use is 'sweet'. One letter makes all the difference to how the story sounds.
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