| "When Darkness Falls" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Rebel blah blah blah On: August 30, 2005 08:54 CDT
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I didn't know you have this posted on ff.net :) Oh well, no one knows everything... Great chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: Rebel blah blah blah On: August 26, 2005 15:14 CDT
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Hi! It's me again :) I don't care if it's bassed on some movie (though I would like to see it) it's still not the same because it's you who is writting and movie is not a book. It's hard to make story interesting when you can't show what's happening, you have to describe it by writting and you're doing a very good job! You are good at describing people feelings and everything that goes through their heads:) If you want even more reviews I can suggest you to submit this story to www (.) fanfiction (.) net Good luck :D
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: BinuyashaS7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really really like your story!!! I saw the movie when it was out in theaters but I think this fic is better. (Though I don't remeber most of it. hehe)I love SasuNaru and NaruSasu. This story rocks.
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Title: Chrono Crusade? Not for me...
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 22, 2005 16:26 CDT
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!! Scary, I've got chills... O__O I can't see too many ways out. Flashlight? Tooth Fairy? Auugghhhh... no sense...
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Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: Choi-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 00:28 CDT
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Cool update, but what about all those dead people? If Naruto had lived with them so long, he could at least have an angsty thought or two... Besides, don't you leave the orphanage at 16? Oh well, keep updating anyway.
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Reviewed By: Rebel blah blah blah On: August 18, 2005 13:46 CDT
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OMG! More more more XD
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Reviewed By: Rebel blah blah blah On: August 16, 2005 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's soo~ interesting! I want to know more. You're the only person I've seen who can make horror out of a fairytale^^. Keep it up :)
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Title: AH! AH AH AH!!!
Reviewed By: Choi sama On: August 13, 2005 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, Is that OROCHIMARU under the mask?!?! Update this, it is just too cool! xD
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